I think Eminem is one of the most talented rappers out there. If I were a boxer, I would have bright red gloves with black sparkly strings, and I would listen to Eminem while I worked the heck outta the speed bag.
He uses so many poetic devises-- clever rhymes like
My thoughts are sporadic... I act -- like I'm an addict
There's vomit on his sweater already, Mom's spaghetti
Personification
Take the hands of time and cuff em
Alliteration
Trip, it's a trap
Metaphor
zero on my target like a marksman
I shut your lane down, took your spot, parked in it, too
But hold your nose cuz here goes the cold water
So, if you're a boxer or a maniac at the gym, add
CINDERELLA MAN
LOSE YOURSELF
TILL I COLLAPSE
Maybe it's only someone who has walked in the footsteps of a fighter who can write like one. Keep fighting. Keep writing.
Shades of. Slim. Shady.
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